Steep Angle

The steep angle alarm jangled as he tried to wrangle the plane with its mangled dangling tail onto the runway, “This jet is too newfangled!”

©2011, Michael Donoghue


3 thoughts on “Steep Angle

  1. Peg says:

    Hee. This must have been fun to fit together, Mike. 🙂

  2. Mike says:

    Thank you Peg!

    The key problem word was “newfangled” — it’s was like I was crowbarring it into the story, but I couldn’t come up with a replacement.

    I snuck in a story involving Chlamydia CD8 Effectors T cells into One Forty Fiction today! Who says hard science doesn’t have a role in fiction??

    Thanks again!

  3. grayestone says:

    I’ve got an M.S. in Biology, BTW. So science-infused work is welcome at Folded, too;-)

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